Sample Poetry Manuscript
This is a sample submission package of four poems.
Your name and contact info should appear in the upper-left corner of each poem.
Any line longer than the width of the page should continue to the next with a hanging indent.
If a poem runs more than one page, each following page requires a header as shown.
William Shunn (he/him)
27 lines
12 Courier Place
Pica’s Font, NY 12012
(212) 555-1212
format@shunn.net
Memory Lane
She strains at the leash,
Trying to turn the corner.
“Not that way,” I say.
But Ella insists,
So I give in and follow.
Not that big a deal.
This short, narrow lane,
It’s a valid path back home,
Not such a detour.
Along the sidewalk
We rush, my arm stretched out straight,
Not pausing to sniff.
She stops at the porch,
Looks at the door, looks at me,
Not old now but young.
We were gone six years,
Back now in the neighborhood
Not even six weeks.
I wish we could knock,
But our friends are not at home,
Not now, not for years.
They fled this city
Even sooner than we did,
Not fond of Gotham
But fond of our dog,
Who wags on their former stoop,
Not fenced in by time.
William Shunn (he/him)
18 lines
12 Courier Place
Pica’s Font, NY 12012
(212) 555-1212
format@shunn.net
Salt Crusted on Automotive Glass
Between me, safe in my seat on this bus,
And the decadent majesty of the salmon-red cliffs of eastern
Utah,
A ghost landscape stands sentinel,
As if etched into the glass by a cadre of capering goblins.
The residue of a hasty window washing--
Loops and whorls of dirt left untouched, uncleansed,
Unrepentent, at the bottom of the glass on each fluid upstroke--
It sparkles, gritty and salt-sharp in the oblique sunlight,
Like a series of pearly solar flares,
Or a graph of the desert’s pulsebeat,
Or spectral negatives of a washed-out sandstone arch,
Photographed in stages over eons of time--
Snapshots from a child-god’s flip-book--
Frothing, leaping, peaking, then falling back into the ground
Like fountains of earth,
A time-lapse planetary signature
That will melt and return to dust
With the next unlikely rain.
William Shunn (he/him)
18 lines
12 Courier Place
Pica’s Font, NY 12012
(212) 555-1212
format@shunn.net
Road Trip, 1995
I-80
Wyoming
night time
snowstorm
eastern slope
Continental Divide
15-foot U-Haul truck
50 to 60 miles per hour
girlfriend white-knuckled
behind the big wheel
swerving skidding
on the downhill ice
all our possessions
rocking in back
not quite
overbalanced
I pump my
passenger brake
of course to no effect
snowflakes like hyperspatial
streaks in the headlight beams
I gently suggest slowing down
or even pulling over to let
me drive instead
but not gently
enough
I’m an excellent
driver she insists
you should have seen
that time I spun out in Texas
and I didn’t even run off the road
but I grew up driving in snow
I tell her and you didn’t
you have to slow
down
it’s the wrong thing
to say and we
William Shunn
Road Trip, page 2, continue stanza
fishtail
again
one
moment
of terror in the
long, slow slide from
west coast to east coast
one harrowing strobe-lit frame
from the superslow-motion
accident that is
us
William Shunn (he/him)
67 lines
12 Courier Place
Pica’s Font, NY 12012
(212) 555-1212
format@shunn.net
Passing
It’s getting harder these days
to tell the crazy people from the sane,
what with technology the way it is.
It used to be that talking to yourself
in public was a sure sign of instability,
like wearing a sign that said,
“Steer clear of me, I’m not quite right,
I might be dangerous, if only to myself.”
But now we all do it, carry with us
an invisible chorus of voices
in a magic Bluetooth cloud, insistent, demanding
voices clamoring for attention, screening out
the real world around us, making us each
more dangerous than twenty actual crazy people,
a more present threat to public safety than
any potential suicide bomber.
Or at least more annoying.
Thorazine does nothing at all to fix it.
The implications of eye contact have changed too.
It used to be that when someone looked at you
when they spoke, it meant they were talking to you.
Not anymore. This morning as I was walking the dog,
I heard the rasp of a window being shoved open,
and a shrill voice saying, “I told you
last time what was going to happen.”
I looked up to see a head and shoulders push out
a fourth-floor window, and the person
was looking right at me. “What?” I called up,
thinking that Ella and I had been mistaken
for someone else, maybe someone who hadn’t
cleaned up after a mess on the sidewalk.
“Oh, I’m on the phone,” said the smiling head,
pointing to its ear, and carried on talking
in the same tone of voice, as if both
conversations were one. And maybe they were.
I still don’t know.
William Shunn
Passing, page 2, begin new stanza
Crazy, right? I’ll say!
But I was talking about people’s voices.
Not the ones they speak with, but the ones
they hear in their heads, the ones no one else
can hear. I don’t have a Bluetooth earpiece,
but I still hear voices in my head. Often
when I have something important I need to say
to someone, I rehearse the conversation
in my head, and sometimes, during my lines,
I’ll slip and speak them out loud. Or more often,
when I’m remembering an awkward interaction
from earlier that day and thinking how
I could have said something better,
I’ll just say it that better way, it just pops out,
and I might be driving, or walking
down the street, or lying in bed with my wife,
and I know I’ve just said something out loud,
out of the blue, out of nowhere, out of left field.
I’m busted. And my wife will
put down her magazine and give me that look,
you know the one, the one that’s half amused,
half worried, the one that says,
“Are you crazy, husband?”
And maybe I am, I don’t know.
No, of course not. I do it all the time too.
But I was trying to talk about how hard it is
to tell the sane people from the crazies
these days. Personally I think cell phones
are just an excuse. All this time
most of us have just been passing,
and now we don’t have to pretend anymore.
Last updated 22 March 2020
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